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The Darkness Land

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bertemu lagi dengan Sarah...!!!! sudah cukup lama juga ga posting di blog ini. biasa lah.. lagi sibuk *sibuk apa? | sibuk ngitungin beras | -_-" |#abaikan* hehe.. okee.. kali ini sya mau posting cerita nih. jadi beberapa hari yang lalu di tempat les ada sesi nonton film gitu, judul filmnya adalah........ jeng... jeng... jeng... ALICE IN WONDERLAND!! *please deh. film lama kali | shut up! | :x*
seru banget filmnya.. tapi, namanya jg buat belajar ya jadi agak ga bisa menikmati film dengan baik. ga ada translatenya. ya ampuun... itu omongan british abisss. untung subtitlenya ttep diaktifin walaupun pake bahasa inggris. seenggaknya gitu ya, masih bisa ngerti dia ngomong apa. nah, disini sya disuruh catat kata-kata yang ga dimengerti abis itu disuruh buat short stories menggunakan kata-kata yang di catat tadi. dan... inilah hasilnya!!!! ga bagus sih. at least, i've tried. hehe.. :)


The Darkness Land


In that night, i was in a strange place. I never saw that place before. It was a ruined place. I walked along the path and i arrived in the old building. I saw the raven perching on the window of building. I tried to enter the building. It was a very horrid place.
I heard someone walking and getting closer... closer.. and closer. Then I hid behind the big porcelain. “ Where is the raven??!” said the creepy creature loudly. “I am here your majesty” said the raven. Oh my God! I was very surprised, i heard the raven could talk. I didn’t believe it. And How reckless i am, i snudged the porcelain and made it fall. PRRAAANGGG....!!!! The creepy creature looked at me. “ who is that?!” said him angryly. I was very afraid and decided to run away. The creepy creature and his raven persued me. But they were faster than me and then he sized me. “you had broken my favourite percelain!! You must die! Off with his head, raven!!” his face was very horrid. “No!! I didn’t mean to break your porcelain. foregive me, please..” said to me almost cried. “of keeping your mouths shut!” said him. The raven was ready to slay me with his sword but when he swang his sword, he didn’t slay me but he threw the sword to me and seized me magnificenly. Th raven said “use the sword to kill him and make this land free...!!!” the creepy creature became more angry and attacked me blindly “why must it be me?” i tried to escape from his attack. “because you are the oraclum means!” said raven and i didn’t yet understand what he said. “then, what do i have to do again?” i talked gasply. “follow me!” said the raven and he flew to the second floor. I ran quickly and followed him the creepy creature kept following and zapping me.
On the second floor, the raven escorted me to the room. There was a glass box in that room. “you look the glass box in there?” said the raven “yes” answered me. “ there was a crown in the glass box and you must destroy it!” said the raven “i don’t see anything” “ you have to touch the glass and you’ll see the crown, hurry up!!” said the raven. I approached it and taught the glass box. The crown emerged when i want to destroy it the creepy creature came and attacked me with his beam. But the beam slipped. I ran to the crown quickly and destroy it with  my sword powerfully. Then a very brigth light shone from the crown, and all the darkness disappeared. The creepy creature too. And the darkness  land changed to be a beautiful land. I MADE IT!! I cried
Suddenly, i felt a pinch on my skin. “wake up from your slumber,Ron!” said my mom. Very regrettably. okee.. It’s just my dream. -_-

thank's for reading.... :)

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